Trundling…
Trundling by, fleetingly
From the window all is silent;
The whole vista veiled,
White gowned,
Evenly covering colour
Softening all form
Hushed; moulded,
Clothed, but revealing a greater glory
Than the temporal greys and smudged hues of winter earth.
River grey and ashen clouds holding their breath…
That which was of its own –
Rich in momentary splendour and beauty –
Surpassed and overwhelmed
By a fresh, pure down,
Delicately and graciously bestowing,
Unfolding revelation.
Dazzling white light
As heavenly curtains draw a gentle, baby blue,
Life-giving light consoling with warm promises
Ever present,
The source of joy to its bride – nature’s bride, adorned and ready –
Purified in time to rekindle beauty and vibrant colour
Richness and depth;
Blushing in her glory
She reflects the rays of her life,
Truth and mystery, clear as crystal
As precious pearls.
Still the flakes flutter and fall…
Train journey back to Germany – 4th January 1986
That is a very picturesque description of your trip. Did you write that in 1986? I thought, at first, you had had more snow than others yesterday!!! 😃
Very good Dawn xxx
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LOL. No, I just found it yesterday when I was looking for something else – in a scapbook of stuff from my time in Germany. Thought I’d share it. 🙂
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Reblogged this on dawnfanshawe and commented:
My first ever (recorded 1986)) poem, from a train window…
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Wow Dawn….1986…..you’ve been writing poetry a very very very long time…..lovely 🎀💟🎀😊
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I’m very old! LOL. xx
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No my dear….you’re very wise……I was just excited to see that year….😅😊😘
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I don’t suppose you were even born then? Bless you. x
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That’s exactly when I was born🙃🤭….best year of my life😅🤣😂😍😉
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yay! Wonderful year! 😀
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THIS was your first poem! Wow, that is seriously impressive. The imagery was beautiful, just purely beautiful. I felt as if I was on that train ride with you. Absolutely delicious writing and crazy good for a first attempt!
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I kept a scrap-book whilst living in Germany and this was pasted in it. 😀 Such a delight to find it all. x Thank you.
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